Magical Sunset
As the day ends to rest
The sunset does its best
Setting on fire the lively waves
Colouring orange the nature he saves
its pure ancient glorious perfection
The great ocean will receive
The burning sun who’s going to leave.
Slowly comes the night
Devouring the magic light:
we are still suspended in a great delight.
As the day ends to rest
The sunset does its best
Setting on fire the lively waves
Colouring orange the nature he saves
its pure ancient glorious perfection
The great ocean will receive
The burning sun who’s going to leave.
Slowly comes the night
Devouring the magic light:
we are still suspended in a great delight.
Explanation of what you think the purpose of the poem is
I think the author is trying to convey the message of a beautiful sunset on a bright and sunny day. In 1st stanza on the 3rd line it says Setting on fire the lively waves this is saying the sun makes the waves turn orange like fire.
An explanation of why you chose the poem
I chose this poem because it has multiple language devices and is has a different rhyme structure that I hadn’t seen before. It went a a b b c in the first stanza and a a b b b in the second.
What type of poem is it? Explain the techniques used using examples from the poem/prayer.
This poem is part rhyming couplet part free verse for example in the first stanza its a a b b c. In the second stanza its a a b b b. There is also a few different language devices used such as personification. An example of personification in this poem is The burning sun who’s going to leave. The is also rhyming in this poem like rest best, waves saves, receive leave and night light delight.
Links to images that suit this poem:
•http://www.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=&imgrefurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w8themes.com%2Fsunset-wallpapers%2F&h=0&w=0&sz=1&tbnid=cscG87WG-DA4gM&tbnh=194&tbnw=259&zoom=1&docid=UBR01WycpAvtVM&ei=ADuVUrPvJI_QkgXY3oCQBA&ved=0CAQQsCUoAQ
•http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/5/58/Sunset_2007-1.jpg
•http://www.wallpaperswala.com/wp-content/gallery/sunset/harbour_sunset.jpg
•http://www.superbwallpapers.com/artistic/orange-sunset-19164/
I think the author is trying to convey the message of a beautiful sunset on a bright and sunny day. In 1st stanza on the 3rd line it says Setting on fire the lively waves this is saying the sun makes the waves turn orange like fire.
An explanation of why you chose the poem
I chose this poem because it has multiple language devices and is has a different rhyme structure that I hadn’t seen before. It went a a b b c in the first stanza and a a b b b in the second.
What type of poem is it? Explain the techniques used using examples from the poem/prayer.
This poem is part rhyming couplet part free verse for example in the first stanza its a a b b c. In the second stanza its a a b b b. There is also a few different language devices used such as personification. An example of personification in this poem is The burning sun who’s going to leave. The is also rhyming in this poem like rest best, waves saves, receive leave and night light delight.
Links to images that suit this poem:
•http://www.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=&imgrefurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w8themes.com%2Fsunset-wallpapers%2F&h=0&w=0&sz=1&tbnid=cscG87WG-DA4gM&tbnh=194&tbnw=259&zoom=1&docid=UBR01WycpAvtVM&ei=ADuVUrPvJI_QkgXY3oCQBA&ved=0CAQQsCUoAQ
•http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/5/58/Sunset_2007-1.jpg
•http://www.wallpaperswala.com/wp-content/gallery/sunset/harbour_sunset.jpg
•http://www.superbwallpapers.com/artistic/orange-sunset-19164/
Mist Of Waterfall, A Sunny Day Waterfall
On a sunny, hot, windy day
chirping birds come my way
Comfortable, beautiful, smashing
When water comes down and crashing
Relaxing, misty air
When people come they will stare
Sweet, pine, wet
People will never forget
On a sunny, hot, windy day
chirping birds come my way
Comfortable, beautiful, smashing
When water comes down and crashing
Relaxing, misty air
When people come they will stare
Sweet, pine, wet
People will never forget
Explanation of what you think the purpose of the poem is
I think the author is trying to convey the message of a picturesque waterfall on a picturesque day, in the middle of a forest. This is shown in the title and line 7 Mist of waterfall, a sunny day waterfall and Sweet, pine, wet.
An explanation of why you chose the poem
I chose this poem because it is a peaceful poem and it rhymes. It relaxes the mind and paints a picture in your head using imagery. It isn’t a complex rhyme structure and has a few different language devices.
What type of poem is it? Explain the techniques used using examples from the poem/prayer.
This poem is a rhyming couplet poem. In this poem rhyming is used to make it more upbeat for example:
Relaxing, misty air
When people come they will stare
In this poem visual imagery as well to paint a picture in the readers mind like Relaxing, misty air When people come they will stare Sweet, pine, wet People will never forget.
Links to images that suit this poem:
•http://www.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=&imgrefurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.hdwallpapersinn.co%2F3dwaterfallsfordesktop.html&h=0&w=0&sz=1&tbnid=URl55o3On8A78M&tbnh=177&tbnw=284&zoom=1&docid=NtZc6rHSVO2OAM&ei=6DmVUqPXHojukAWmnYDwDQ&ved=0CAIQsCUoAA
•http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/f/f6/Waterfall_Lepena.JPG
•http://www.hdpaperz.com/wp-content/gallery/waterfall_4/waterfall-wallpapers-hd-2.jpg
•http://wallike.com/amazing-waterfall-wallpaper.html
I think the author is trying to convey the message of a picturesque waterfall on a picturesque day, in the middle of a forest. This is shown in the title and line 7 Mist of waterfall, a sunny day waterfall and Sweet, pine, wet.
An explanation of why you chose the poem
I chose this poem because it is a peaceful poem and it rhymes. It relaxes the mind and paints a picture in your head using imagery. It isn’t a complex rhyme structure and has a few different language devices.
What type of poem is it? Explain the techniques used using examples from the poem/prayer.
This poem is a rhyming couplet poem. In this poem rhyming is used to make it more upbeat for example:
Relaxing, misty air
When people come they will stare
In this poem visual imagery as well to paint a picture in the readers mind like Relaxing, misty air When people come they will stare Sweet, pine, wet People will never forget.
Links to images that suit this poem:
•http://www.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=&imgrefurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.hdwallpapersinn.co%2F3dwaterfallsfordesktop.html&h=0&w=0&sz=1&tbnid=URl55o3On8A78M&tbnh=177&tbnw=284&zoom=1&docid=NtZc6rHSVO2OAM&ei=6DmVUqPXHojukAWmnYDwDQ&ved=0CAIQsCUoAA
•http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/f/f6/Waterfall_Lepena.JPG
•http://www.hdpaperz.com/wp-content/gallery/waterfall_4/waterfall-wallpapers-hd-2.jpg
•http://wallike.com/amazing-waterfall-wallpaper.html